如何提升你的说唱歌词押韵-中间韵技巧(中英文对照)

作者:中文rap 2016-12-15

如何提升你的说唱歌词押韵-中间韵技巧(中英文对照) 【HMC独家翻译】《The Rappers Handbook》中文版 第二部分 提升你的押韵-中间韵 【英文原版PDF电子书下载地...

  如何提升你的说唱歌词押韵-中间韵技巧(中英文对照)

 

  【HMC独家翻译】《The Rapper's Handbook》中文版 第二部分 提升你的押韵-中间韵

  【英文原版PDF电子书下载地址】http://pan.baidu.com/s/1mg5E7Ug

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  翻译:向星星(中国-湖南) 审核/校译:斯科夫(中国-上海)

  【中文翻译】

  第二部分 提升你的押韵

  中间韵

  [小贴士]

  “我做过的最爽的事情就是在说唱上超越别人。当我准备这样做时,意味着如果他在一句中使用了10个音节,我将会使用15个,如果他使用了15个,那么我将用20个甚至25个。如果他在两个Bar中使用了2到3个单词的韵脚,那么我将用4到5个单词。我就是要在技巧上超越你。”

  —Bun B在他人专辑中以嘉宾身份提及说唱时的观点

  “In-Rhyme”是“Internal Rhyme”的缩写,(译者注:中文译为中间韵),一个中间韵是指在一句的中间部分出现押韵。使用它们是提高你押韵技巧的一个好方法,如同菜谱中的调料一般,中间韵会以不引起人们注意的方式而增加巨大的冲击力。

  [添加中间韵]

  中间韵是一种在一句话里面的押韵,这里的单词不必押句尾的韵,他们可以押自身或是其他句子中的韵。这里有一个不包含中间韵的歌词例子:

  Moving quick like a pack of wolves hunting,

  Telling all of these false haters to stop frontin’

  这些都是一些是很无聊的又没有什么趣味的歌词,但我可以很容易地改变这种状况。我可以找寻一些单词改变其中的中间韵,如同这样:

  Moving fast like a pack of wolves hunting,

  Telling all of these fake haters to stop frontin’

  通过将“quick”变为“fast”的方式,我创造了一个押“pack”的中间韵。通过将“false”变为“fake”,创造了押“hate”的中间韵。看看改变之后哪个听上去更好?小的变化产生很大的影响。

  [以中间韵开始下一行]

  你还可以用中间韵押句末单词的韵。举个例子,通常以之前一句末尾的韵脚来开始新的一段。就像这个来自Root的《Next Movement》:

  yo the

  whole state of things in the world ‘bout to change

  black rain falling from the sky look strange

  Black Thought采用句末韵脚来写第二行,并且在第二行末尾再次使用。另外,Black Thought认为“state”和“things”的发音与“change,rain,strange”十分相似。

  [视野拓展]

  歌曲例子:

  Planted their feet to build a land of deceit,

  plotted, conquered and spread disease

  across the seas,

  it’s the Spanish fleet,

  welcome to America, the era of early terror

  where Columbus named the country out of error

  -Akir,“I Want America”

  但你可以写出比这更加狂野的押韵,也可以摘录下Akir的一些语句。Akir是一位来自纽约的“天才级”地下MC,被称为“Next To Blow”的创始人,他创造了独特又流畅的Flow、独具匠心的歌词以及大量的中间韵。我很荣幸与他在Flocabulary共事,Flocabulary搜集美国Hip-Hop历史上的专辑,也通过说唱音乐,传授美国历史。

  Akir走进了我们的时代广场工作室,我给了他一系列纳入押韵的真实事件。我们共同做了一个Beat,几分钟后,他编排好了牛逼的Flow。他所采用的方法是仔细倾听Beat并找出其中的Flow,当他完成时,他会把某些押韵的单词编排在某些鼓点以及其他声音上,让他的这个Verse听起来自然而多样,加上他使用不工整韵、中间韵和多重押韵,编排在一起。令人惊叹的是,他还能保持正确的主题,轻松地讨论哥伦布到达美洲。

  [练习这个]

  重写几个已经写完的Bar,替换其中的单词用来产生中间韵。不要为了押韵而失去歌词的意义。

  【英语原文】

  Part Two - Elevating Your Rhymes

  In-Rhyme

  [droppin’ knowledge]

  “The best thing I can do is pretty much out-rap the guy. And when I say out-rap the guy — say, if he uses ten syllables in a line, I’m going to use fifteen. If he uses fifteen, I’m going to use twenty, twenty-five. If he’s rhyming two or three words within two bars, I’m going to rhyme four or five words in two bars. I’m going to out-skill you.”

  –Bun B on rapping as a guest artist on other people’s albums

  “In-rhyme” is short for “internal rhyme.” An in-rhyme is any rhyme that occurs internally within a line.Using them is a sure-fire way to improve your rhymes.Like a subtle ingredient in a recipe, in-rhymes can add big punch without calling too much attention to themselves.

  [Adding In-Rhyme]

  In-rhymes are rhymes that fall within the line itself.These words don’t have to rhyme with the word at the end of line. They can rhyme on their own, or with any word in any other line. Here‘s a sample lyric that does not contain in-rhyme:

  Moving quick like a pack of wolves hunting,

  Telling all of these false haters to stop frontin’

  Those are some pretty boring lines. There’s nothing lyrically interesting about them at all. But I can easily change that. I can look for words to change that will create in-rhymes. Like this:

  Moving fast like a pack of wolves hunting,

  Telling all of these fake haters to stop frontin’

  By changing “quick” to “fast,” I create an in-rhyme with“pack”. Changing “false” to “fake,” creates the rhyme with “hate”. See how much better that sounds? Small changes make a big difference.

  [Start the Next Line with In-Rhyme]

  You can also use in-rhymes to rhyme with the words at the end of lines. For example, one common use is to start a line with a word that rhymes with the end of line before it. Like this from the Roots’ “Next Movement”:

  yo the

  whole state of things in the world ‘bout to change

  black rain falling from the sky look strange

  Black Thought uses the rhyme sound from the end of line one to start line two, and then uses it again at the end of line two. Plus, the way that Black Thought pronounces the words, “state” and “things” sound very similar to “change, rain, and strange.”

  [Going Wilder]

  Pro Example:

  Planted their feet to build a land of deceit,

  plotted, conquered and spread disease

  across the seas,

  it’s the Spanish fleet,

  welcome to America, the era of early terror

  where Columbus named the country out of error

  -Akir, “I Want America”

  But you can obviously go much wilder than that.Take a few lines from the rapper Akir. Akir is gifted underground emcee doing his thing in NYC. Already named the Source’s “Next To Blow,” he brings a unique flow that mixes smooth delivery, intelligent lyrics and lots of in-rhymes. I had the privilege of working with him on a Flocabulary track for the Hip-Hop U.S. History album, which teaches American history through rap music.

  Akir came into our Times Square studio and I gave him a list of facts to incorporate into the rhyme. We put on a beat, and within minutes he had some sick rhymes to lay down. The method he used was to listen very closely to the beat and find a flow that worked with it. As he spit, he’d put certain rhyme words right on certain drum fills and other sounds, to add a natural complexity to his verse. Plus he uses slant rhyme, in-rhyme, and mutlis together. Amazingly, he’s also able to stay right on topic, discussing Columbus’ arrival in America with ease.

  [Practice This]

  Rewrite a few bars you’ve already written, replacing words to create in-rhymes. Try not to sacrifice the meaning of what you wrote just to fit in rhymes.

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